Writers of the Future Volume 33

Now that my first novel manuscript rough draft is done, you might think I’d start on revisions. Not quite. Often writers need time and distance from a rough draft to do a good revision. I recently began grad school so I will likely set it aside for 2 years while I work on my MLIS.

If you know any writers, you probably know that writers can’t just stop writing altogether.  I will be working on writing some short stories when I have a spare moment or two. The problem is that I don’t read many short stories. You can’t write what you don’t read if you are going to be good at it. I desire to write well. So the solution is to find short stories to read. I read some magazines with short stories which I didn’t care for very much. The beauty of short stories is they involve little investment of time. If you don’t like it, you are not out much time. However, if you love it, then it is over too quickly. That is why I historically haven’t spent much time reading short stories. For me the bigger the book the better. But I need to learn the craft of short stories. So I found L. Ron Hubbard’s Writers of the Future Volume 33. If they have 33 Volumes of it, then it must be good, right?

*Disclosure: I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

The first thing I noticed is that when you get a book from NetGalley it is sent out before it has been formatted all pretty. There was no table of contents or titles for each story. So I apologize for not giving credit where credit is due to each of the authors. If I was reading a regular novel instead of an anthology, this would not be a problem. Live and learn, right?

L. Ron Hubbard’s Writers of the Future Volume 33

Writers of the FutureEditors: L. Ron Hubbard, Anne McCaffrey, & David Farland

By by Anne McCaffrey, David Farland ( Author) (Editor), Robert J. Sawyer (Author), Todd J. McCaffrey, Larry Elmore, Bob Eggleton, L. Ron Hubbard, Stephen Lawson , Sean Patrick Hazlett (Author), Preston Stone, Dustin Steinacker, Anton Rose (Author), Doug C. Souza (Author), Walter Dinjos (Author), Jake Marley (Author), C.L. Kagmi (Author), Andrew Peery, Ville Meriläinen (Author), Ziporah Hildebrandt (Author), Andrew L. Roberts (Author), Aituar Manas, Chan ha Kim, Yader Fonseca, Jason Park, Christopher Kiklowicz, Anthony Moravian, David Furnal, Michael Michera, Hanna Al-Shaer, Ryan Richmond, Joshua Meehan, Asher Ben Alpay, Molly Elizabeth Atkins (Author), David VonAllmen (Author), Rachel Quinlan (Author) (Illustrator)

Publisher: Galaxy Press

Illustrator: Rachel Quinlan

The Summary

Here is a quick teaser for each of the stories in the first half of the book:


The first several stories were very enjoyable. The first story was a locked room mystery set on the moon! The writing was excellent. The ending was not as clever as I had hoped it would be though.


The second story was about a man in a Mech, a mechanical robot used in battle. He was injured on the battlefield and knew it was really bad. He went home to see his family one last time. The description in this story is gritty and the emotion is visceral. This one did surprise me. The ending was quite satisfying, which is rare for me. I often find short story endings too abrupt. This one was well done in my opinion though.


This one is about an alien being, called the Envoy.  The Envoy is revered as something holy. The most recent ambassadors did not return. A team has been sent to get them back. What they find shakes their faith. What they find makes them look at what they know about the entity with more knowledge. This one was very interesting. I do like the perspective and the introspection in this story.


I didn’t care for this story. It was a story about a man in a lifeboat from what I could gather. It was one of those stories where the POV character is hallucinating and doesn’t really know what is real and what is not. I don’t usually like that kind is stories-; concrete stories are better.


The next story was about a man who fell in love with a selkie. There just aren’t enough stories about selkies. This one was powerful with emotion– heart-rending. This had a satisfying ending but I still wanted to hear more of the story.


This story is about some beings that do not have a corporeal form. This story makes me wonder, if when we explore space and start finding other life forms, will they be more advanced than us or more primitive. This story is a fascinating test of humanity.


Ready for a good old ghost story? Do you like ghost hunters? This one had a twist though!


Varga and Fiske. Fiske is just a simple hunter. Varga is a warrior. The lanky hunter must guide Varga into the mountain where strange things have happened and people have disappeared. They find the shredded remains of a campsite.  The creatures are something I’ve never heard of before. I’m curious to know if this was the author’s creation or an obscure myth they dug up. Either way, I love this monster! As a reader, I was torn between pitying the creature and hating it! Well done! I think this one was written by Anne McCaffrey.


Gators in the sewer type story. Meh.


I liked this one quite a bit. It is about a boy whose mother is dying. To save her he must kill a rare bird which is special to him. This author writes internal conflict well.


That is just the first half of the book. I may go back and reread some of these. They could teach me a lot about writing internal conflict in a very short time. I recommend you read this book!


The Writing

For the most part, the writing was excellent. The characters were engaging and had depth throughout most of the stories. There were a few that just didn’t grab my attention, but most of the stories were engaging.

Plot DiagramWhat I like best about this book is that the endings were really good. I normally strongly dislike the ending of short stories. Usually, they leave the reader to figure it out from the clues they laid out. They literally drop the end off: they hint at the resolution and completely omit the denouement (falling action). They cut the story off right where the line is between the middle and end in the diagram above. I guess I’m a lazy reader. I’d rather not have to put the clues together and figure it out. I like to see the story come together and simply must have a resolution and have at least a tiny bit of denouement to be happy at the end of the story.  The vast majority of these stories had sufficient resolution and denouement to make me happy.

Who Will Like This?

This book has a little bit for everyone that likes some form of Science Fiction. There is something for those who like alien stories, ghost stories, outer space stories, technology stories, mythological creature stories, and even a mystery. This will also appeal to anyone who likes nearly instant gratification since you can sit down and read a whole story in less than an hour.


In the first half of the book…
(and likely the second half as well.)

Foul Language: None
Graphic Violence: None
Sexual Content: None
Substance Abuse: None

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It is my Blogiversary! August 2017 Book Giveaway!

I can’t believe I have been blogging for a whole year now! I have learned so much and made so many new friends through this blog! I love connecting with my readers through the comments, Twitter, Instagram, and email. I’m happy to announce that I now have an author page on Facebook! (link below)

Goal for this Year

I post far too infrequently as of now, I hope to start making a weekly post. I am going to try my best, but I am working on my Master in Library and Information Sciences and I’m working, so I don’t know if that goal is realistic. I do have some ideas for some new kinds of posts I’d like to start doing. I am going to expand beyond just book reviews and try to provide more content having to do with reading and writing.


To celebrate my blogiversary, I am going to run my first book giveaway! The book I’ve chosen to giveaway is The Last Magician by Lisa Maxwell. Y’all this book is gorgeous! I’m going to have a hard time parting with it. I read the first couple chapters and so far it is amazing! It was released July 18, 2017, so I hope that means you don’t already have it. It is a hardback book.

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Magnus Chase and the Gods of Asgard: The Sword of Summer

Years ago I read The Lightning Thief by Riordan along with the rest of the world. I enjoyed the book, not enough to go on and read the rest of the series though. It wasn’t bad. My kids loved it. It is a great way to introduce kids to the basics of Greek mythology and get them excited about it. Here in Texas, Greek mythology is required in 7th grade. Some might argue that it is not an accurate portrayal of the original stories. Of course not. But what I like is that kids come to class and hear about Medusa and think, oh yeah, I’ve heard of her! Instead of thinking, Medusa? A lady with snake hair? What? That is crazy-talk! So the books serve a good purpose in my opinion.



Now, why did I pick this book up? I have been fascinated by Norse Mythology since before it was cool! I bought a book of Norse Myths by Kevin Crossley Holland maybe a decade ago. Right after I read Magnus Chase, I picked up Norse Mythology by Neil Gaiman. Guess what I’m reviewing after this post!


Magnus Chase and the Gods of Asgard
The Sword of Summer

By Rick Riordan
Edited by: I wasn’t able to find it.
(Little Rant: The front matter has the illustartor’s name, author’s name, rune artist’s name, and cover designer’s name, but it doesn’t have the editor’s name. Editors are a huge part of what makes a book amazing, so why don’t they get more recognition? Usually it is in the acknowledgments, but since I listed to the audio version, I don’t have that. )
Publisher: Disney-Hyperion
Narrator: Christopher Guetig

First, here is a book trailer for you that I found on Riordan’s website.

I thought that was pretty cool!

This book begins with a teen boy named Magnus Chase. (Interesting name! Apparently Riordan got it from Cassandra Clare and dedicated the book to her for the idea!) His parents died in a fire two years ago. He has been homeless ever since. He refused to go into foster care. It is his birthday. His crazy uncle, Randall, was out looking for him.  

Out of the blue, he gets attacked by a fire giant. Why is he attacking a teenager on his birthday? That is just crazy!

He has two friends who help him. One friend is named Blitz; he hates daylight for some reason. His other friend is Hearth, who is deaf. The three of them all know sign language. I love that Riordan included a character with a disability. It added another problem for them to overcome in the scenes. It also gave representation to a population of people which are grossly underrepresented in literature. Go Riordan!

Magnus, with his friends Blitz and Hearth, are plunged into a wild adventure that is a twist on all the old Norse myths. As I said, I read Norse Mythology by Neil Gaiman right after this book. It has been eons since I read the Holland one so I had forgotten most of what I read before. When I read Gaiman’s book, I realized that Riordan had taken a ton of the myths and put Magnus into the center of those stories in some way. I think it was rather brilliantly done!


I think my favorite scene in this book was a competition between two dwarfs to craft the greatest gifts for the gods. Magnus and friends needed one of the dwarfs to win. Hilarity ensues. I won’t spoil it for you but it made me laugh out loud.


The Audiobook

 At first the narration of this book drove me absolutely bat-crazy! I have never heard this narrator before. The way he read Magnus made the character sound vacant headed. After awhile I got used to it and the character somewhat fits with that vacant head personality. After all, Magnus is a teen boy caught up quite unexpectedly in a world of gods and giants and is completely out of his league. I’m curious to listen to another book narrated by this person.

This is actually an excellent book for having narration. I don’t know about you, but I am not overly familiar with how to pronounce all the names in Norse literature. Often when there is a word or two I don’t know how to pronounce, I just skim over it without much stress. This book has quite a few though, so the narration was nice to have with this book.

The Writing

 One thing I love about the writing in this book is the description, similes, and metaphors. Here are some examples:

“His tie looked like it was tied when spun around in total darkness.”
“A scab was ripped off my brain, exposing memories from when I was six years old. I remembered…”

I love the silliness, unique perspective, and sarcasm of this character.   

Who will Like This?

This book would be appropriate for an advanced 3rd grader and up from there. This book is aimed at around 4th grade to 7th grade age kids.  If you like humor and adventure, you’ll like this book. It is very fast paced too, which is one of the reasons kids love Riordan’s writing so much. 

Foul Language: Very, very mild. A few words that kids use all the time because some people don’t consider it a cuss word.  
Excessive or Vivid Violence: None
Sexual Content: None
Substance Abuse: None

So overall what is my opinion? I give it 4 quills.four quill rating

Bonus: I stumbled onto some very exciting news! Take a look at this: http://rickriordan.com/2017/04/rick-riordan-presents/

I love that Rick Riordan is doing this project! I mean really love! I am fascinated by by stories from other cultures and I can’t wait to read these. My regard for Rick Riordan has gone up because he is using his fame to promote diversity and help promote new authors.

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The Best Audiobook Narrators

I have had a subscription to Audible for about three years now. I have a 45 minute commute to and from work each day and audiobooks make it a joy. Some audiobooks are excellent and some are not. Many times the narrator either makes or breaks the story. I can’t imagine all the work that goes in to reading a novel for narration. When I read to my classes, I get tongue-tied all the time.

These narrators are all masters at their craft. I would listen to any book read by them. I’ve listed them alphabetically by last name because I can’t possibly decide which one would be number one. In my opinion these are the best I’ve heard so far:

  • Scott Brick– narrated the Isaac Asimov’s novels, Frank Herbert’s Dune, and many more.
  • Jim Dale– narrated The Emerald Atlas, all the Harry Potter books, and many more.
  • Neil Gaiman– narrated The Graveyard Book and all his other amazing books.
  • George Guidall narrated The Golem and the Jinni
  • Mary Robinette Kowal– narrated Seveneves,  I am Princess X, and many other stories by various authors. She also wrote and narrated Shades of Milk and Honey, Ghost Talkers, and many more.
  • Michael Kramer– narrated The Eye of the World series and all of Brandon Sanderson’s books. Both Robert Jordan and Brandon Sanderson write long novels, so he has created literally hundreds of hours of entertainment for us!
  • Kyle McCarley– narrated The Goblin Emperor
  • Nick Podehl– narrated The Name of the Wind and the other Rothfuss books.

The most remarkable thing is Mary Robinette Kowal and Neil Gaiman are not just narrators. They are also writers. Both are truly talented writers.

If you read this blog regularly you know that I don’t normally love romance stories. However Kowal is one of the podcasters on my favorite podcast, Writing Excuses. I’ve listened to her writing advice for years. I admire her teaching ability on the podcast. She writes regency romance but it is fantasy so I was intrigued. So I read her first book called Shades of Milk and Honey. It was a marvelous story. I loved her creative use of magic, not as the main focus but as elegant window dressing.  It is meant to be kin to Pride and Prejudice and it is. You simply must read this book!

Neil Gaiman writes almost poetic YA novels. I read The Graveyard Book and fell in love with his narrator’s voice, both his actual voice AND his writing voice! That story writing voice has such a unique tone. I’m actually attempting to emulate that tone in a short story I’m writing. I am a firm believer in this method of learning from masters of the craft like Gaiman.

You may notice that I only have one female narrator on here. It is important that the narrators can read both male and female voices. There are very few women who can imitate the male voice in a very believable way. Mary Robinette Kowal is one of those. She is a professional puppeteer in addition to being a gifted author and narrator. Her voice training as a puppeteer shows in her narration.

Each of these narrators allow us to immerse ourselves in these delightful stories, forget our surroundings, and live the events. I just want to say thank you to each one them; your hard work is appreciated by this reader.

Thank you

Would you add any narrators to my list? 

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The Emerald Atlas Book Review

The Emerald Atlas is another book that has been on my TBR list since it came out a number of years ago. My sister listened to the audio book with her kids and I couldn’t be out done, so I downloaded the audio too. My sister and her kids loved it and so did my son and I. We listen to audiobooks in the car constantly because I have a 45 minute drive too and from work each day. Sometimes my son listens to the books and sometimes he sits in the backseat playing with his Rescue Bot figurines. With this book he actually requested that I turn it on each time we got in the car, “Mommy can you turn on the green book?” That is the first time he’s been so engaged to request a book.

The Emerald Atlas 

Emerald Atlas by John StephensBy John Stephens
Edited by: ?
Publisher: Random House
Narrated by Jim Dale

The book begins with three young children, Kate, Michael, and Emma, who for unknown reasons are give up for adoption. They know their parents are alive and have promised they be together again. Because of this they become unwanted since they tell all potential adopters that their parents will come back for them.

After being shuffled from agency to agency for ten years, they finally land in a big ole mysterious house near a mysterious town with no children and a mysterious forest fraught with danger. In exploring this house, they find a green book which transports them to another time. They discover a scary mean countess, some monsters, some kind and helpful people, what happened to the children, and Dr. Pym. They must find a way to save the children and keep what the countess seeks out of her hands.

Did I mention there are magical creatures, dwarves, wizards, sorceresses, and elfish type people in this book? Do you see why I love it so much?

The Audiobook

The narration is stunning! Jim Dales voice is deep and rich and versatile. He is so very talented! So now I’ve added him to my list of favorite narrators. Maybe I’ll do a post on magical voices someday soon.

The Writing 

I work with middle school children so I know how kids that age behave in general. Some authors get it wrong and have  five year old act like a teen and have teens act like five year olds. I had a threenager in my house two years ago, I’m not talking about that. I’m talking about developmental impossibilities. This author doesn’t do that; he nails the ages!

Emma is five or six (about the same age as my son), the thought process and perceptions Emma has is perfect! She desires to do more than she can.

Michael is the geeky, know it all type obsessed with knowledge in general and specifically dwarves. I can relate to the way he geekily obsesses over something!

Kate is the one with the weight of the world on her shoulders. She must keep her brother and sister safe and hold herself responsible for everything. As an oldest child I relate to her the most! Stephens has a knack for writing believable characters.

The story is a delight as well. Even though there are three main characters and sometimes the story goes in three different directions, the characters are distinct enough to keep it straight.

Who will Like This?

If you love fantasy, orphan children, a bit of mystery, and lots of adventure, then you will love this! It is not a challenging read and it is perfectly free of anything inappropriate, so any age child from 4th grade and up. Maybe even some advanced third graders could tackle this one, or kids with the help of their parents. This would actually be a lovely read to your child book for the elementary age children. The lexile level is 720, but don’t stop your child from trying to read it if they want to, even if the they are currently reading at a lower lexile or a higher lexile. Lexile levels should never stop a child from reading what they are interested in, which is why I don’t always put it in my reviews.

Foul Language: None
Violence: None
Sexual Content: None
Substance Abuse: None



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The Land of Stories Book Review

A bunch of my students have read or are reading these books. They love it! The first book in the series is called The Wishing Spell. I found it to be a fun romp through old fairy-tales.

Until I started this post I was confusing Eoin Colfer, author of Artemis Fowl series, and Chris Colfer, author of The Land of Stories series. I just saw Colfer and thought it must be the same person. Colfer isn’t all that common is it? Well, they are not the same person. They are both of Irish decent though so maybe they are distant relatives. I think the writing bug is often in the blood.  (My grandfather was a writer and poet.)

The Land of Stories

by Chris ColferBook Cover The Land of Stories The Wishing Spell
Illustrated by Brandon Dorman
Editor Alvina Ling

Alex and Connor are twins who’ve lost their father recently to a car accident. Now they and their mom are trying to cope with the loss.

When Alex and Connor’s birthday rolls around, their grandmother surprises them with a book. It is the book of fairy tales that she read to them when they were younger.

They are delighted but something strange is going on with the book. They fall through the book into the land of stories. They do not know how to get back home until they learn of the wishing spell. The items needed for this spell are challenging to attain. In their travels to get the items, they meet Snow White, Cinderella, Red Riding Hood, the Big Bad Wolf, and many other characters they heard about all their lives. They also discover a family secret. 

The Writing

I love the strong narrator voice in this story. It reminds me of the narration in The Graveyard Book by Neil Gaiman.

Sometimes this book had excellent, creative metaphors, and sometimes the metaphors were lackluster. The plot has a delightful, unexpected spin. It teaches a good lesson about life, which I don’t want to say because *spoilers* (said in River Song’s voice- I’m a Doctor Who Fan.)

The pacing of the story is quick enough to keep striving readers engaged through the whole book.

Audio Book

I listened to this one as an audio book.  Chris Colfer narrates this himself. I didn’t know, until I started looking up some information for this post, he was one of the actors in Glee. He has experience with acting and does a pretty good job narrating.

Who Will Like It?

Anyone who loves fairy tales will like this.  As I said above, many of my students are reading this series and love it. I read the book because my students recommended it to me. Some of the best books I read are due to my student’s recommendations. We have an awesome librarian at my school who puts really great books in the hands of the kids too.

Striving Readers and Advanced readers alike enjoy this book. Plus this is only book one in a series of six books.

Foul Language: None
Violence: None
Sexual Content: None
Substance Abuse: No


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Red Rising Book Review

I wasn’t sure what this book was about when I picked it up. The cover grabbed my attention and there was a lot of hype on Instagram. I knew it was a story about some people on Mars. I love Science Fiction almost as much as fantasy, so I gave it a go. I found it hit the New York Times Best Seller List for a reason!

Red Rising
by Pierce Brown


Editor: Mike Braff
Agent: Hannah Bowman
(From what I can gather)

In the future there is a caste system based on colors. Reds are the lowest ranking. They believe they are pioneers who mine underground to help terraform Mars, helping the human race survive.

Darrow is a Red and a talented drill operator. He learns what few Reds know: Mars is actually a fully developed planet with whole metropolis full of people living on the surface. The Reds are drilling simply to make the Golds and other colors richer. They are nothing more than slaves.

Darrow sacrifices almost everything to infiltrate the Gold training institute.  He must learn leadership and compete for his life in the most ruthless game. In this regard it is like Hunger Games, but with more intervention from benefactors, who work against Darrow because he is a low ranking gold. There are hundreds of players in this “game” with all the politics, alliances, betrayal, and double crosses that come with the struggle for power.  It is a enthralling mix of grav boots and castles, honor and corruption, deception and life truths.  Worst of all Darrow find himself making friends with some of the golds and fears he will immerse himself in the part he is playing so much that he will lose himself in the process.

The Writing

I found the writing engaging. Brown knows how to write compelling characters and weave complex plots.

Who Will Like This Story?

This has a bit of something for everyone.  It has castles, which makes the fantasy loving part of me happy! It has brutal battles, strategies, but also insightful thoughts on what makes a true leader. It has enough science fiction technology to keep sci-fi lovers happy. I suspect that the sequels will contain even more technology.

This story is brutal, ruthless, and gritty. It has some mild language, violence, and sexual content. For that reason, I would reserve this story for more mature readers.

I was surprised to find this is a High-Low book for the Lexile (HL630). High-Low means it is highly engaging for older readers but the vocabulary and sentence structure is simple enough for readers who struggle with complex texts. So this would be an excellent book for a 14 or 15 year old that doesn’t like reading much.

Foul Language: Yes, sort of. Darrow says bloody damn and gory damn. Slag is a replacement word for a four letter word.
Violence: Yes. Not detailed but definitely gory and brutal.
Sexual Content: Yes. There is no description of rape, but it does happen in the story.
Substance Abuse: No.


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First Rough Draft Done!

Sorry it has been awhile since I posted. It is busy season at school. Actually in education, when is it not?

On March 12th, I finished typing the rough draft of my manuscript!!
*insert scream of excitement*
This has been on my imaginary bucket list for a very long time. When I was in 7th grade study hall, I spent study hall writing 40 something pages of a novel, but abandoned it. After graduating college, I wrote 130 pages of a novel. That is when I invented this fantasy world that I’m writing in now. I started trying to teach myself how to write novels and nearly drown myself in how-to-write-stories books and self doubt.

I’ve listened to Writing Excuses podcast for 7 years or so with the intent of one day getting back into writing. I looked at my old 130 page manuscript and decided that I should start with a new book. The new idea simmered in my head for a few months. I finally decided, I’m 39, almost 40. I’m not getting any younger. Honing the skills to write novels are not ones that happen over night. If I’m going to get published one day I better start now.

August 2015 I began writing chapter one.

Fast forward through 19 months of writing while working full time. Now I can finally say I have finished a manuscript! Third time’s a charm right? It is 99,917 words long– had to keep it under a 100,000 words. That is 400+ pages standard manuscript format, ready for an edit.

IMG_0525.JPGI still have a long way to go with this novel. It is broken in so many ways, it might be hopeless. For now, the plan is to let it rest for a few months while I work on a few short stories to hone some specific writing skills.

After a few months, I’ll go back and revise it to practice my revision skills.

I plan to do like Brandon Sanderson and several other authors I’ve heard do: write a book and submit it for publication while I work on the next book.  I can’t remember the exact number, but I think Sanderson was working on writing book 7 or so when his 5th book was picked up by a publisher. I imagine I’ll have to write at least that many to get good enough to be published, and I can only hope to become half as talented as Sanderson.

For now, I will celebrate my first victory!

What is this book about?

Elemental magic users, called Faer, are being persecuted by the new king. A draconic demon is summoned to kill the Faer. Vera and her daughter are  seamstresses for the nobility.  They must keep their magic abilities secret while helping their people. The Faer must survive while staying true to their non-violent beliefs. Not all the Faer agree on how this should be done. 

That is the elevator pitch. It needs some work too.

Writing is a long journey, full of hard work, but immensely enjoyable work.



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Graceling Book Review

This book has been on my To-Read List for AGES! I’d heard it was good and they were right. I enjoyed it very much. I actually picked it up a year ago and read the first chapter. I realized if I continued to read it, I’d not be able to put it down. I had things which had to be done, so I put it down until I had time to read it. Life happened and a year later, I picked it up again. It was a fast read because it is so hard to put down.


By Kristin Cashore

Published by Harcourt
Editor: Kathy Dawson
(I am going to start listing the publisher and editor, when I can, to help familiarize myself with the names of editors and publishing companies I like. Hopefully one day I’ll submit my own manuscript to them one day– probably far, far into the future.)

In the world of Graceling some people are Graced with different abilities. They discovered Katsa was Graced with the ability to kill when she accidentally killed a person at eight years old. Now as a young woman she practices sparring against multiple trained soldiers easily. Her uncle, the king, uses her as his thug– beating people up who didn’t pay what the king felt was his due. It is not the life she would have chosen for herself though.

Po, a man Graced with combat skills almost comparable to Katsa’s, comes from another kingdom and becomes her friend. Together they embark on a journey rife with unimaginable dangers. They uncover a dangerous secret that could destroy the seven kingdoms.

The Writing

The story is well written.  It is paced very fast so it will keep readers engaged. Reluctant readers may do well with it. I found the main characters very compelling.

Who will like this story?

If you like magic systems, combat, and nonstop action, you will love this story. The lexile is 730 so an average 6th graders could handle this book.

It does have some romance in it but it is not primarily a romance story. Boys and girls in my classes like it. There is some sexual content, but it is not overly detailed. For conservative readers, you may want to wait to read it until you are 13 years old.  I allow my 11 year olds to read it if they wish, unless I know parents are conservative. I tend to be rather liberal in what I allow kids to read though.

Foul Language: No.
Violence: Yes. Nothing too graphic.
Sexual Content: Some.
Substance Abuse: No.

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Six of Crows Review

I saw this book all over Instagram and people kept raving about it, so I decided to try it. I am so glad I did! I love a good heist story and this is the best I’ve read.

I read Shadow and Bone a number of years ago when it first came out. I thought that one was okay, not bad. It just didn’t strike me as anything spectacular. I imagine through lots of hard work, Leigh Bardugo has vastly improved her writing skills. I admire her all the more for that.

Six of Crows

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by Leigh Bardugo
Publisher Henry Holt and Co
480 pages

The story begins in Ketterdam a corrupt city filled with criminals of all kinds.

Kaz Brekker is a young man who has survived and is climbing the ranks of criminals. The city has made him tough. He is hired to break someone out of the most secure prison in all the lands– a prison which no one has ever successfully broken into and survived. Kaz accepts and selects a highly skilled team to accomplish this.

Kaz is the mastermind.

Inej, called The Wraith, is a girl who seems to disappear at will like a ghost. (My favorite character!)

Wylan, a privileged boy who ran away from that privilege. How he fits into the group is not apparent at first.

Nina, a Heartrender, who uses her magic to survive this city.

Matthias, a soldier who desires revenge.

Jesper, a sharpshooter.

Each character has their own story, so none of them are flat characters. Each character has their own reason for going on this heist. Sometimes those reasons conflict with the goals of others, so they have to decide where their true loyalties lie with their friends, or someplace else.

The magic system is fascinating and full of creative surprises. Heartrenders can manipulate things having to do with the body. Fabricators can manipulate metals and other materials. Tidebringers manipulate water. As you read you will discover many other fascinating tidbits of information on this magic system. I love creative magic systems.

Even the city itself feels like a character with a personality. It is multidimensional like a character.But that is more so in Book 2 The Crooked Kingdom. Usually I read book one so that I know enough to recommend a story to my students. I don’t have time to read book two, three, four, etc. This was an exception though. When I finished Six of Crows, I immediately started Crooked Kingdom.

The Writing

Amazing! Each chapter is an alternating POV. The Six of Crows rotates through 5 of the characters. Crooked Kingdom has 6 regular character POVs plus a couple other characters for a single chapter as needed. She writes all the POV changes beautifully. Each character has their own unique voice.

Each character has their own back story but she doesn’t dump it all on you at once. She artfully weaves it into the tale as the backstory becomes necessary to understand the character. The story comes out organically from events in the story present. I never tired of hearing the back stories. Each character grew in some way; they learned who they were and who they were meant to be. If you want to study how to write characters well, read this!

Like many experienced readers, I can often accurately predict plot twists. Bardugo was able to throw some in that were a pleasant surprise to me.

Who Will Like This?

Everyone! Okay Seriously, those who love a great heist story. Think low-tech, magical Oceans Eleven, only better because it is a book with all kinds of delicious details.

People who like a good character story will love this.

If you love cool magic systems you will love this. It has a little love interest but as a side story to complicate things for the characters, not the central focus. The type of love here is not some immature all-consuming fawning over a person (that drive me crazy), it is a more mature type of love. The characters are all 16-17 years old but it is easy to forget because the life they live forced them to all grow up real fast.

The Rating

Foul Language: No.
Violence: Yes. Nothing too graphic. Some description is a bit gory but that is due to description of something I can’t spoil, not violence.
Sexual Content: Hints at it. Very vague, most younger readers wouldn’t know it.
(Crooked Kingdom has a little more but nothing too graphic.)
Substance Abuse: Well yes. It wouldn’t dissuade me from allowing a child to read it because it is emphasizing the dangers of the drug and becoming addicted to it, not glorifying it.

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